Final draft reflection

1. I think my final draft turned out pretty good I explained the quotes a lot and I think most people would understand the message of the poem
2. I worked on explaining the quotes more and explaining the message more so that my essay was 500 words
3. What was hard about this assignment was getting to 500 words I thought I was done when I had like 300 words. What was easy was explaining the stuff because I really feel the stuff in the poem
4. I think my strengths were knowing and being able to explain the message of the poem. I think some weaknesses were formatting my essay and me being able to write enough words
5. If i had more time I would try to improve my introduction paragraph someone made a comment about it but I disagreed with it and had more things to fix but if I had more time I would try to fix the into a little more
6. I think I'll get points for having 500-600 words and the quotes explaining the thesis and not having grammar errors, I might get points off for not having a creative enough title.

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