Zach hill ib lit and performance

1. What was your vision as a director/creator for this project? To make a drama full story that I saw in my head based of the story of an hour  2. What elements of the original story did you maintain in your project? I kept the names of some of the characters the same and Mrs mallard thinking her husband is dead and her being happy about it  3. What did you change about the original story in your project? I changed it to make it that she’s cheating and mr mallard kills them at the end  4. What is the twist or climax of your adaptation? Wen mr mallard comes home and sees she’s cheating  5. What is the strongest part of your project so far? I think the storyline is  6. What is the weakest part of your project so far? The iMovie because I wasn’t good at using the app 7. How has this project helped you learn about how stories work? It shows there has to be things leading up to a climax and a resolution  8. How has this project helped you learn how theater works...

https://youtu.be/0kPSX8CBTDs

Pic 1 Mr. Mallard leaves the house for Chicago "Bye Honey" Pic 2 Mrs. Mallard on her phone texting Richard Pic 3 Mrs Talking on the phone with her sister who tells her Mr Mallard's plane crashed "No way" Pic 4  Mrs mallard crying Pic 5 Mrs Mallard on her phone again texting Richard not crying anymore "Come over" Pic 6 Mrs Mallard and Richard talking on the couch "Whats good" Pic 7  Mr Mallard walks into the door "Honey I missed my flight" Pic 8  Mr Mallard sees his wife and Richard on the couch "What the hell" Pic 9 Mr Mallard grabbing a knife from the kitchen Pic 10 Mr Mallard stabbing Richard Mrs Mallard "I'm sorry" Pic 11 Mr Mallard stabbing his cheating wife "Its too late for sorry"

The genre will be Drama Mrs. Mallard Mr. Mallard Lonnie (guy who mrs mallard has affair with) Josephine The setting is Buffalo New York Mrs mallard is mr mallards wife and she is having an affair with the man and she is texting him while she thinks her husband is on a flight to Chicago. She gets a call from her sister and she tells her that the flight her husband is on had crashed and she goes into her room and thinks. She cries a little bit and then she gets happy that she could be with Lonnie instead so she invites him over. They are talking in the living room and mr mallard comes home and yells to his wife that he had missed his flight and he’s back he walks in to see her in the living room with Lonnie. He goes into the kitchen gets a knife comes back and kills both of them. Pivotal moments. When mrs mallard is texting Lonnie. When her sister calls her. When she goes into the room to think. When she tells Lonnie to come over. Resolution and Climax. When mr mallard kills ...

- I would change a lot of the words into more modern words - I would make it so that it’s like a plane crash or something because railroad accidents aren’t normal now and I would say that he missed the flight - I would make the reason she’s happy about him being dead is so she can be free to be with the person she’s having an affair with.