How to modernize

- I would change a lot of the words into more modern words
- I would make it so that it’s like a plane crash or something because railroad accidents aren’t normal now and I would say that he missed the flight
- I would make the reason she’s happy about him being dead is so she can be free to be with the person she’s having an affair with.

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