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In a lonely small cabinet of a small ranch house in the room of a women who used to be young but is now old lays her old things. A small link dress and a small yellow dress hang from the mini clothesline. A small red and yellow truck with a ladder is parked on the floor of the cabinet. A pink bunny sits next to the truck and in the other side stands a doll with a yellow shirt and a blue hat and overalls. Hanging from the clothesline above the red truck is a red toy plane. On the background of the walls of the cabinets there is flowers.



The lonely toys sit in the cabinet sad and bored of each other. They used to be so happy because their owner Quanita would play with them when she was younger. She used to play with them all day and night and the toys would have so much fun and be happy all the time.  Slowly Quanita started playing with them less and less because she was growing older and had to go to school and had other responsibilities. Now Quanita is 17 years old and never has time to play with her old toys because she’s always busy doing school work or hanging out with her friends. So they are always sad. They hope that someday Quanita will give them to her kids so they can have someone to play with them all the time again.